CATW Workshop Class 1 (Boys/Girls + Cheating)

Summary/Response Summary- Name the source Main Idea of the article Supporting details In your own words (paraphrased) Response – Your opinion Can include quotes or paraphrasing Should include information from your life, experience, previous learning, past readings, etc Discuss something specific from the article

Essay Structure Introduction – Hook, general statement Introduce your topic(s) Thesis Body paragraph(s)- Supporting detail (support your thesis) Discussion, evidence, etc Conclusion - reword (your thesis) remind(the reader of your points) relate (make it feel finished)

CATW
Introduction -
Hook or GS
Summarize the article
Thesis

Body paragraph(s) -
Respond to the article
Back up your claims with evidence, discussion, and/or previous learning, etc
You MUST refer to specific parts of the article (quote or paraphrase)

Conclusion -
reword
remind
relate

Source
Multitasking negatively affects our brains
Experiments showed we’re better at doing things one at a time
We’re not as efficient even after we stop multitasking
When we do things all at once, we don’t do any of them well
Your brain has limits to what it can do at one time
We don’t know the effects, but we think they’re bad
There are things you can do to improve your brain function after hurting it with multitasking

Summaries

What is a summary?

Using your own words, briefly describe the writing’s main ideas.

Include: *Main idea(s)    -Talk about the story *Cite (name) your source    - Title, Author, where it was published   (such as the title of a newspaper) *Use your own words (paraphrase) *Longer than one sentence, shorter than original *Only talk about what the author has said *If there are two opinions, you must share BOTH

Don’t Include: *Small details    -Don’t retell the story *Do not quote the author directly *Do not share your opinion

Source?
Boys and Girls Together… Jennifer Medina … New York Times

What is/are the main idea(s)?
Children being taught separated from the opposite gender

What are some of the supporting details?
1. How classes are conducted
2. Not everyone agrees on the new system

3. Implemented to address decreasing test scores and increasing behavioral problems

4. It is an experiment – no scientific evidence of effectiveness

Are there two opinions? What are they?

Some parents see better behavior from their children

Some believe it reinforces bad things

Thesis: Boys and girls should not be separated

-       Discourages healthy interaction (Paragraphs 1 and 2 | Paragraph 4)

-       Won’t be prepared for the future (paragraph 5, line 3)

Some schools are teaching children in gender-segregated classrooms, according to the article “Boys and Girls Together, Taught Separately in School” by Jennifer Medina printed in The New York Times. In classrooms separate from the other gender, boys are taught by a teacher who behaves like he is coaching a sports team, while the girls are taught by a woman who uses a much more sensitive approach. The new approach is an experiment that many schools are trying across the country to address problems in test scores and students’ behavior, but the strategy is getting mixed reviews. While some parents feel that their child is paying more attention without the added distraction of the opposite gender in the classroom, some experts are worried about the future implications of the new teaching strategy, insisting that it will hurt children later in life when they can no longer avoid working with the opposite sex. Research hasn’t yet confirmed whether the teaching method is more effective than more traditional approaches, but I believe that there is no way this teaching style will benefit students. It dissuades students from interacting with and learning about the opposite sex and makes them ill-prepared to face the future when they’ll be forced to work in a mixed environment.

            While I understand the goals of this experiment, I believe they are ultimately misguided. For instance, we see in the article how the teacher for the boys and the teacher for the girls run their classes completely differently. This reinforces the idea that girls and women are one way and boys and men are another, but we know today that not all men are exactly the same, nor are all women. I saw a commercial for a movie the other day that was about how boys are raised being taught that boys don’t cry, and they often have trouble expressing their emotions. Mr. Napolitano treating his group of boys like a basketball coach is exactly the kind of treatment that creates issues like this. I think society has come to the understanding that boys need girls around so that they can learn about a broader spectrum of behavior than simply yelling and roughhousing and sports. Additionally, the girls’ class is being taught as if the students there are all fragile and emotional. This is ridiculous to me, because not all girls respond to this kind of coddling. They need boys around to balance out this treatment.

            Another problem with this program is that it does not prepare students for the future. Sure, Samell Little is quoted as saying that his son is focusing better in school now that there aren’t girls around, but if his son is having that much trouble focusing now, how will it get better without him being taught how to focus and behave. Taking away the distraction is not the same as teaching him how to overcome it. One day he will be forced to work with women, and he will not know how to handle it. In the article, Kim Gandy seems to see this problem as well and states that “a boy who has never been beaten by a girl on an algebra test could have some major problems having a female supervisor.” I remember what it was like being a flirtatious and distracted middle schooler. I think learning how to get past that and focusing is one of the big lessons school is there to teach. Without this lesson, we’ll end up in the working world with men not trusting women’s math skills and women confused why men don’t respond when they don’t treat them like a coach would. This does not help them be successful in the future.

           

            In conclusion, I don’t support separating students by gender. Some students may be more successful in the short run, but in the end it will only cause them problems down the road. I think it’s better to teach our students how to interact with each other rather than trying to keep them apart.

In each body paragraph:
Topic sentence
At least 1 reference to the article (something specific)Discussion of the reference (don't just refer and leave it standing alone)
Evidence (something from your life, example of a similar situation, something you saw or read, something you heard about, etc)
Discussion should always aim to prove your thesis

Source:
“Many Students Say Cheating Is OK” by Kathy Slobogin, published a CNN.U.S.

Main Idea(s):
Many students do not have a problem with cheating

Supporting Details:
Pressure and competition
Getting into good schools
The internet
Poor example set by the adult world
Teachers have started using new methods to fight cheating

Two sides?
Not really, though do mention both the students’ and teachers’ efforts

Possible beginnings:

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You CANNOT say:

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According to “Many Students Say Cheating is OK,” written by Kathy Slobogin and adapted from CNN.U.S. (Fragment)

In Kathy Slobogin’s article, “Many Students Say Cheating is OK” adapted from CNN.U.S, she explains that a large number of today’s students find no problem with cheating. They are found to cite the pressure of competition and the need to get into a good school as justification. The internet has also made plagiarism so easy that any student willing to pay can have their homework completed in minutes. Finally, some say the adult world sets a poor example for students, which leads to their cheating. Now, teachers are having to work just as fast as students to come up with and use new ways to combat the amount of dishonesty in students’ work these days.